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2) 虽不曾会面，然一个在潇湘馆临风洒泪，一个在怡红院对月长吁，却不是人居两地，情发一心！（第二十九回）杨译：True, they were still apart: one weeping to the breeze in Bamboo Lodge, the other sighing to the moon in Happy Red Court. But although apart, at heart they were as one.霍译：Though they had still not made it up since their quarrel, the difference between them had now vanished completely ：In Naiad's House one to the wind made moan,In Green Delights one to the moon complained,to parody the well-known lines. Or, in homelier verses:Though each was in a different place,Their hearts in friendship beat as one.宝黛二人因“金”、“玉”之事大吵一场，听到贾母“不是冤家不聚头”这句话，“好似参禅的一般，都低头细嚼此话的滋味，都不觉潸然泣下”。曹雪芹连续使用对偶，“一个在潇湘馆临风洒泪，一个在怡红院对月长吁”写出了宝黛的动态，“人居两地，情发一心”抒发了宝黛的心情。这两组对偶句，双管齐下，互为映衬，句式匀称且富有变化，声律 和谐充满音乐美，其效果自不是寻常写法可以同日而语。杨霍二译句式工整，发挥了拼音文字句法结构的相对随意性，霍译将对偶句单行列出，更突出了形式美感。这一点是霍译本对齐整句式（包括短语等）的独特处理样式，体现了该译本的一大特色，给读者提供了发现美、欣赏美的空间，使语言的表达更加清晰、自然，句式结构更加引人注目。前文已经提到，对偶是汉语特有的修辞手段，尽管英语中也有类似的表达方式，但是，由于汉英语言各成一体，对偶结构上的均衡美无法在译文中得到全面体现，霍译的这种独特的布局方式，无疑在一定程度上弥补了不少缺憾，是对原文整齐对称的结构形式的消化吸收和再度创作。又如：3) 园内各处，帐舞蟠龙，帘飞彩凤，金银焕彩，珠宝争辉，鼎焚百合之香，瓶插长春之蕊，静悄无人咳嗽。（第十八回）杨译：Everywhere in the Garden were hangings and screens brilliantly embroidered with dancing dragons and flying phoenixes; gold and silver glittered, pearls and precious stones shimmered; richly blended incense burnt in the bronze tripods, and fresh flowers filled the vases. Not a cough broke the solemn silence.霍译：In the Separate Residence painted phoenix and coiling dragon flapped and fluttered on drapes and curtains,gold and silver-work gleamed and glinted,jewels and gems made a fiery sparkle,subtle incenses smouldered in brazen censers,'everlastings' blossomed in china vases;—and all was so silent，that throughout the whole of that great garden not the sound of a cough was to be heard.这里连用三组对偶，“帐舞蟠龙”对“帘飞彩风”，“金银焕彩”对“珠宝争辉”，“鼎焚百合之香”对“瓶插长春之蕊”，短短不足三十字，便将省亲别墅大观园的景致气氛渲染得栩栩如生，历历如在眼前。经过对 比分析，两段译文对句中的三组对偶的表达基本相同，但霍译再次以其独特的结构布局而羸得了读者的青睐。由此可见，对偶作为以形式取胜的辞格，其译文也应从形式上与原文取得一致，才能更接近读者的审美情趣，使译文读者能与原文读者那样，得到修辞效果上的共鸣。 像例3这样的片语传神之处，《红楼梦》中多有出现。这种利用对偶句式的简洁凝练来叙事、状景、抒情，可抵大段描写刻画。责任编辑：admin
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